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Drinking game

ColorfullyMonotone

Published: May 10, 2017

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Description

There's a drinking game in their world where you see how many cups you can stack on someone's head after each drink. Too bad one of them is passed out...Also the way she's doing it is cheating lol

Originally for a contest entry, but I ran out of time

Oh well, I just figured I'd finish it up anyways since I was almost done. It was so hard finding references >_< I pretty much winged half of it.

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3827x2400px 4.93 MB

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Cyber-Cypher

Jun 19, 2017

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Good Points:

- I really like the lineless art style. It's kind of cartoonish (and it reminds me of some animated cartoons with a lineless art style.) and painterly at the same time!

- Ooh! I think I can see how that character cheated in that drinking game. How mischievous. They used that other guy's drinks when they passed out. (Sneaky indeed...)

Improvements/Suggestions:

- I think it would be way better if the light sources (In this case: the gas lamps) are much brighter because it would explain the bright lighting on the characters.

- I imagine that the brown-haired character would be drinking a lot. I suggest putting some indicator that they're drunk or something. (Ex: Blushing)

Hope this helps! ^_^